This is an updated version of the song. I really wasn’t happy with it before so I reworked the whole thing. This one is much smoother. I still have a few tweaks I want to add but I think this is a much better representation. Check it out let me know what you think. Comments very, very welcomed.
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Ben said,
July 22, 2011 at 4:00 pm
Love it!! Really like the ending on it a lot!
Rob Williams said,
July 22, 2011 at 8:35 pm
Awesome Jay… love it. The chord progression made me smile. Sounds good.
LeahStockholm said,
July 23, 2011 at 8:34 am
I really like it =)
Sandi said,
July 23, 2011 at 11:11 pm
Yep, you’re amazing, and I’m proud. It’s a powerful song. I like the changes, even though I thought the first one was great!
reenie said,
July 24, 2011 at 6:41 am
Reminds me of Talbot, and some of the artists from the late 70′s early 80′s ~ nice job Jay !!!!